Each week we're critiquing a postcard-in-progress from our community of Memory Writers.  To submit your scene for critique, use the form here with the subject line "Cold Eyes."  

Welcome to the first SBYF Memory Writing workshop.  I'll be guiding you here in blue.

For years now we've been wondering how we might take what happens inside a closed SBYF workshop and share it with everyone.  It's been a long,...